Nice quick hit story. You could cut some time off it though. Love the last picture. Sound quality sounds flat. Would like to get more of a feel for the place and shenanigans that is sure to happen there. There's some, but with a piece like this you need a lot of filler. its a little Joe-on-stage heavy. Where's the before and after. Looks like it was a fun place to be.
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Nice quick hit story. You could cut some time off it though. Love the last picture. Sound quality sounds flat. Would like to get more of a feel for the place and shenanigans that is sure to happen there. There's some, but with a piece like this you need a lot of filler. its a little Joe-on-stage heavy. Where's the before and after. Looks like it was a fun place to be.
love image #3...you should send it to Jakob, postcard style :)
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